My mars

My Moari body

Why is Earth important?

Why is Earth important? Earth is important because they have oxygen and liquid water.

Firstly, they have living things on the earth and they drink clean water and they get healthy by eating healthy food.  For example the people get food for them to be a life forever and they can live forever too.

Secondly, the people eat healthy food to get healthy  and they eat veggies  so they can live forever and they will drink clean water and they get healthy by eating healthy food.  

For example they make food in the pot to eat their food at home and at our nan’s house too.

Thirdly, The people go to the shop to get some food for them to eat some food and the people will get a live forever at home and when the baby come out and they get some food for the baby to eat the food because if they don’t eat food they will die.  

For example the people safe their baby so they die because if they don’t they will have no baby and if they have food they will die they will not live anymore.

Finally, Earth is important because it is has  oxygen and clean water and they drink clean water too and they eat clean food and they eat healthy food at home and at school and they can swim in clean water too at home and at school and have clean food to eat at school and at home and they make their food in the pot for their kids and they eat is up and they have clean water to wash the dish and they make tv and chromebook to watch tv and do our work on the chromebook and we have clean food at the shop and they make it and the shop people get them to bringing at the shop so the shop people can pay it for the people that need food if they don’t get some food they will die if they don’t eat food at home and at school and the school will get some food at school and home and they make shop for the people to get some food at the shop for the kids and they have food to eat at home and at school if they don’t have anymore food they will never be a life they will be die if the have anymore food at the shop.

Skylah

Edmund hillary

1 hunua road

Papakura, Auckland

Dear board of trustees

Thank you board of trustees for paying us to go to stardome and i really appreciate what you did for our school thank you so much ;)

Your sincerely

Skylah

Skylah

Edmund hillary school

47 Scott road

Papakura, Auckland

Dear Starn dome

My Star dome

Thank you Josh for showing us planets on the board.

Some things I learnt at the trip were showing us all the planets that we don’t know like the moon.

Some things I learnt after the trip was talking about the planets at school.

Some things I learnt at the trip was talking about the planets on the board with the other kids.

My favorite part at the trip was lying down on the seat and looking at the stars and the movie. Also going into groups to find the things on the paper.

Yours sincerely

Skylah

My star dome trip

About Shoud people send money on space

Persuasive Writing Plan

Introduction Topic question: Should people spend money on space exploration?	People should  spend money on space for example researching asteroids because the asteroid could blow up on our earth.
Main reason 1 Fact Example	Firstly, Another asteroid could explode and crash into our planet. example - For example 65 million years ago can asteroid crashed into our earth and killed some of the dinosaurs.
Main reason 2 Fact Example	Secondly, Space researchers sometimes invent things that they can use to help earth. Example- For example space researchers make water filters and sloefrplanels cell phone and smoke alarms  artificial limbs work out machines and insulation keep warm.
Main reason 3 Fact Example	Thirdly, Did you know that cockroaches and dragonflies,turtle  and lizards been here since dinosaurs. Example- For example if the asteroid came at our earth we will die on that earth because we don’t have anymore earth to live on.
Conclusion In the conclusion you re-state the introduction. For example: Finally, people should spend money on spgtace exploration because…..	Finally, The space rearexhing find the baby milk for them to be safe and they couldn't die in the mspace and they came back down and the other’s went on the rockship and they went to find something

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Should people spend money on space?

People should  spend money on space for example researching asteroids because the asteroid could blow up on our earth. P1 Another asteroid could explode and crash into our planet.  For example 65 million years ago can asteroid crashed into our earth and killed some of the dinosaurs. P2  Space researchers sometimes invent things that they can use to help earth. For example space researchers make water filters and sloefrplanels cell phone and smoke alarms  artificial limbs

insulation keep warm. P3 Did you know that cockroaches and dragonflies,turtle  and lizards been here since dinosaurs. For example if the asteroid came at our earth we will die on that earth because we don’t have anymore earth to live on. Finally, The space reareching find the baby milk for them to be safe and they couldn't die in the space and they came back down and the other’s went on the rock ship and they went to find something to.