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Wednesday, 30 November 2016

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Edmund Hilllary Going to the zoo.

A long time ago edmund hillary school went to the auckland zoo and I saw some animals at the zoo with KPMG and I like the food because it yummmmmmmmm to eat at the auckland zoo with edmund hillary school and KPMG took us to the elephant show and I saw some food at the auckland zoo I like the animals and KPMG give us some food at the auckland zoo and edmund hillary school like the auckland zoo with KPMG and I like the animals because their was a show at the auckland zoo I like the chocolate chuck cookie and we had ice cream at the auckland zoo.
P1 We went to the auckland   and we went on the slide on the baby park at the auckland zoo and the tiger was asleep at the auckland zoo and the elephant move’s on the dirt at the zoo with two people at the auckland and I saw two lion Lying down on the grass at the auckland zoo and I like the park because it fun to play on at the auckland zoo. 


P2 We had some food at the auckland zoo with KPMG and I like the food because it good to eat at the auckland zoo I like the zoo  because it fun to go there and I like the food and the ice cream because it young to eat at the auckland zoo  and my favorites is to eat the ice cream and the food at the auckland zoo I like the animals at the auckland zoo because we get to look at them at the zoo and I like the food at the auckland zoo and I like the auckland zoo because it fun to go there again and I was good at the auckland zoo because I got the ice cream from KPMG at the auckland zoo.
P3 I like the animals because they look cute at the auckland zoo and I like the food because it young to eat at the auckland zoo and we got into groups at the auckland zoo and I like the food at the auckland zoo and I like the ice cream because it good to eat and I like the animals at the auckland zoo my favourite things is to go on the park to play on.
I like the food because it young to eat at the auckland zoo and I like the ice cream and I like the food because it food to eat at the auckland zoo and I hope KPMG see us again at the auckland zoo because I like them to take us to look at the animals at the auckland zoo and I like the zoo because it fun to go there with my school and with my mum and dad and with my two brother and I like the KPMG because they are fun and I like to go at the auckland zoo with my mum and dad and  with my two brother and I like the park because we play on it at the auckland zoo and we go on the rock climbing at the auckland zoo and I like the animals because we go and look at them at the auckland zoo and we go and have some lunch at the auckland zoo and I like the ice cream because good to eat at the auckland zoo.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Skylah,
    Im Jada. I have read this and maybe you should have put it onto a drawing because if posted on a doc it will come out really long... I hope you understand.

    Kind Regards,
    Jada

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