On Sunday me mum dad and my brother’s went to the park and went to the pool too and we went for a swim with my mum and dad and my brother’s because my mum want to go to the park and went to the pool too.

P1 The first thing i did with my family was having a swim at the pool and going to the park to have a play on and my brother’s went to the pool with mum and dad and I went to the pool with them to because we like going to the pool and we like going to the park to because we can play on.

P2 Also we went to our nan’s house to go at another park with cousin and we went to the shop to get some lollies to eat at our nan’s and it was yummy and we went to the pool with my cousin and we went in the warm pool because we were cold and my mum and dad went in the warm pool to because they were cold to and we went on the water slide with my mum and my dad and my brother’s and my cousin and it was fun.

P3 Then we went to the park with our cousin and it was fun at the park because we were playing on the swing with my cousin and we were swing high because our dad and mum was push us high and my brother was crying because it was too high that why he cried and we went to our nan’s again and we watched a movies at home because want to watch a movies and we went to our nan’s house to play outside and we went to the park again because it is to fun and we went to our nan’s to sleep.

Con I had lots of fun because we went to the park and to the pool and went to the shop’s to get some lollies for us to eat at nan’s house and I was one of my friend named maya and she was on the park and we ate our lollies before we go to bed at nan’s house and we went to the beach because it was a lovely day outside and we had a swim at the beach and we had some food at the beach and it was yummy as.